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Dreams are not limited and never will.
We are the dreamers.
Are you one of us?
It's a world of limitless....
Let's dream~
Cipt. Arya
This the morning of my day.
I'm looking at the sky that so blue and bright.
I'm looking at the sun,
and makes me to remind how stupid that i've done.
I'm trying forget you from my mind,
just don't want to disturb you
with the man you want.
But how could you be fine,
if everytime you meet me,
i'm always gone.
Now i say to you,
i can never leaving you.
Now i come to you,
and make you smile.
I'm sure that you wanna too...
Reff:
How fool what have i done...
leaving you.
Forgetting you is something i can't do.
I can never do...
And it's gonna hurt you ...
o...
Baby i'm sorry, i made you cry
Jealousy makes me blind to see
all that we have done.
But today i start to reach you one more time.
This the morning of my day.
I'm looking at the sky that so blue and bright.
I'm looking at the sun,
and makes me to remind how stupid that i've done.
I'm trying forget you from my mind,
just don't want to disturb you
with the man you want.
But how could you be fine,
if everytime you meet me,
i'm always gone.
Now i say to you,
i can never leaving you.
Now i come to you,
and make you smile.
I'm sure that you wanna too...
Reff:
How fool what have i done...
leaving you.
Forgetting you is something i can't do.
I can never do...
And it's gonna hurt you ...
o...
Jealousy makes me blind to see
all that we have done.
But today i start to reach you one more time.
Ok. Edited silakan di cek lagi. hahahaha. Thx masukkannya.
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bait ke dua baris 1 : "I'm trying "to" forget..."
baris ke dua (setau gw) habis want to gak bole pake gerund jadi mesti nya"Don't want to "disturb" you"
bait 3 baris 2 mestina (lebih enak) : "I can never leave you" gak pake "be"
baris 5 : wanna itu dari "want to" jadi mestinya langsung "... you want too"
trus bagian reff : baris 4 lebih enak "I can never do" lebih commonly used.
baris 5 : "It's gonna "hurt" you."
bait terakhir : habis" I'm sorry" mending tambah "I"
bukan Jealousy tapi "jealous" aja
N mending, klo nulis inggris "i" mestina pake huruf gede "I" hehehe
gw gak tau bener ato enggak
gw mikirny gitu
hehe
sbrnrna : kalimat "what the fool that I've done" kesannya agak janggal, tapi binun maw ganti apa
hehe
^^
oReL-chan mengatakan...
16 Desember 2008 pukul 22.03
Daripada mikirin isi, judulnya dulu tuh... Once = one time. Once more time = one time more time? -_-a harusnya 'One more time' aja. hehehe
What the fool I've done mungkin bisa diganti What a fool i've been. Atau Fool things I have done... yang pasti kamu ga bisa 'melakukan' fool. Karena fool adalah adjective (kata sifat).
All in all aku nangkep maksud lagunya n it's pretty, tapi inggrisnya harus diperbaiki...
Maria mengatakan...
17 Desember 2008 pukul 14.32
kata Arya (yg kompinya lg rusak) : "Itulah seninya, tidak perlu mengikuti aturan yang ada.."
demikian kata arya..
Adi : "hmm..."
wendy : "Jangan pake id aku!!! ganti ID win sono..!!"
wend mengatakan...
17 Desember 2008 pukul 17.19
Wah, tq banget temen2, maklum, english brutal n slanker. "You know I know, ok ok", wakakakaka
Anonim mengatakan...
13 Januari 2009 pukul 13.43